Dark alley(revelation) ch 1 rewrite

standing in front of my fathers house the

sky is getting dark,i looked up enjoying

the view of the twilight for it has been lo

ng since i last enjoyed such a view.tod

ay five years ago my father died the doc

tor said it was some sort of animal atta

ck for his trout was ripped open and his

body was like death itself,i was only 10

when he died and now am in high sch

ool.i started walking to my friend's hous

e then i saw a man forcing

a young girl in her later teen to a lonely

area by the street, he seem not to take

notice of me so i followed him trying ha

rd not to be seen the man trew her on t

he floor, pinned her down as he forced a

brutal kiss to her lips.he tied her mouth w

ith a cloth and like a beast ripped off her cl

othing as she screamed but it was useles

s.he slapped her by the face and started su

cking on her ''c'' sized barest at that point i r

ealized how turned on i was, but instead i d

ecided to call it all quit with the drama and

help the poor dark haired,pale & beautiful girl.

used me,she pushed him off her, stood up

said "all you men are the-same, you are

all the time yet you don't value the opposite sex,you are

ery selfish and cruel that is why i will have a

conscience" she moved up to him and

a wet kiss. The wet kiss seem to last

when thy started striping each other and they flay on

ground with the man laying on top of her.

started on the nipples playing with the left

sucking the right as she started morning

she said " stop teasing and and fuck me like you

never fuck again". At this point even

i cannot see the mans face i am sure he

be surprised as much as i am(knowing

few munites ago she was literally

to this area and showed resistance to the best of her

).

Like a flash he jammed himself fully into her

she sreemed but the man was fast enough

put his hand over her mouth so the

nted to get my cork out and stroke it for it

Beginning to hurt,but i stayed put because if

eventually got found out i would not look

embarrassing,i watched as he started with

long strokes and then all of a sudden lost

and

fucking her with full fast strokes and in a

munites she announced that she was

to cum, with strength that i can't seem to

where it come from she rolled over him and

riding him fast and in a munite or so she started

and fell on him still riding him,and the man

screaming.my dick wanted to burst at the view

she rose her head in pleasure, that is when i

those canine teeth and the horror of blood all

her face.i dashed out from the area not minding

noticed and ran as fast as my leg could take me ho

me.....

The next day

I woke up and hoped that yesterdays incident was

a dream so i prepared for school took breakfast

mom and aunt Betty and was off to school. It

a new section and new students are arriving to

school so since am not begin noticed by the girls

school, a new catch would be a good thig,that is

this hot pale skinned girl entred the school gate

with load of stuffs so walked to her and offered

and she handed me a box before looking up. I al

most jumped out of my skin its that face, that terrible

killer's face

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