Murder - Page 18

Ok, I noticed my first story got low rankings. Now, I want to ask you guys how I could improve. Feel free to tell me or suggest anything I could do to make my stories more enjoyable for you. I would gladly accept any help or advice you’d give me

Chapter 1: The mercenary's beginning I know you can hear me, my champion, so please, open your eyes. A distinctly feminine voice sounded in my head "Huh? Where am I? Who's there?" All around me all I could see was blackness. I am the one who freed you from death's grasp

She turned around as the sun beamed over the trees on that fall Saturday morning. Ashley stood on her sidewalk looking across the street, and the trees behind her as crumbled leafs scattered across the road. She felt like she was being watched

Quickly slipping into a crowd of elves you manag to lose the city guards that seemed to find you with suspicious speed as soon as you enter the city. You wipe a bead of sweat from your forehead

BOOK ONE THE DROOGS The Characters in this story speak in English but also in a slang from the book "A Clockwork Orange" known as Nadsat. The Glossary can be found below

The man of a pure evil heart stood surrounded, a flintlock pistol in one hand, a saber in the other. The American pirate’s eyes shifted from right to left. Five more loaded pistols were on his chest. Ten blue uniformed soldiers with empty bayonetted muskets and fear

A warning to readers, this story features dark themes including murder, rape, and slavery if you don't like these stories leave now. All sexually active characters are over 18 . Galactic Vendetta Part 03 Part A, The seeds of discourse and the birth of Andrea

“When I’m here I like to hear the local new. Do you mind?” “Not a bit. I’m interested in finding out what’s going on too.” The weather forecaster said that it was a typical Fort Worth early September evening and sunset would be about 748. It was followed by the local news

E.G. Saunders here. By now you know there's actually a deep story wrapped around the sex - and, yes, there is more sex coming. Pleasures come to those with patience - Subs know what I mean. I'm going to tease your mind, grip it tightly

The Life Ch.1 Bajir Job By Jax_Teller It was the Saturday the 6th of June on a long hot dry stretch of road between here and there. The sun was hot and burned the skin on my back. I rode my Harley with intent and malice

The Hit By Juli NBabe A tall man in silk pajamas sits on his couch speaking into a cassette recorder. He is 50'ish and graying at the temples of his brown mane

I saw the little blue eyed blond as soon as she came into the bar I hang out in in Rio Azul. I drink a few beers there when I make my infrequent trips in from the jungle for supplies. Among other things I’d once been an engineer for one of the world’s largest oil companies

Eloise was glad that she was at last settled into a job and able to send a little money back to her parents in Avignon each month

Stacy’s head spun when the car made even the slightest turn and every time it did, it had come as a complete surprise. She had other priorities on her mind than where they were going because her head was bobbing over the lap of the driver

In an old underground warehouse, location unknown A secret and brutal fighting tournament was being held, for glory and money. Everyone who thought he stood a chance surviving to the end, entered. The crowd was rowdy, loud, and wanted to see a good fight

CHAPTER THREE: PART TWO OUT OF TWO! JAMIE VENN LOTT I'm straight And for me to be horny for this "Veronica"..

A Warning to readers this story features the themes of slavery and rape. If you don't like stories with these then leave now. To those that stay this story is not a glorification of rape and slavery instead a story of two people finding redemption in each others arms

Another one dead, and papers had given the murderer a name, but no one was using it yet. The police still called him "The Whitechapel killer," and the people on the streets called him just "the killer." Nothing more was needed

BIG FUCKING DISCLAIMER: Some people thought my tone was a bit dickish in this disclaimer, so please bear in mind that that's not my intention. First: this story is EVEN WORSE than its predecessors, although it's a much shorter and far less descriptive