Stockholm Syndrome - Page 3

I feel I should mention that this is my first attempt at writing a story so I would really appreciate any and all feedback you can give me
Assignment #4 Interrupted by Chloe I have some very unique talents and am very discrete which is why he hired me. He pays very, very well per assignment; six figures, never starting at less than $150,000
**THIS IS A SECOND ATTEMPT OF PUBLISHING AS THE FIRST ONE DIDN'T SHOW UP** Hi guys. Long time no see. This part doesn't have too much sex scenes, but it is a preparation to the next one, were things will start to get damn agitated
----- Chapter Five - Water Lisa nearly passed out because of the low temperature and the lack of water and food. Thend suddenly the door opened and the man entered the room. "OK slave, hello there
London Tale … In a shop doorway on Trafalgar Square three shadowy figures stood, unnoticed in the hurly-burly of humanity thronging around on a busy Saturday afternoon
Bradford was used to having the dominant role in a relationship but being unable to do so during his entire period with Anita, he decided it was time for her to yield or for him to move on
“Why is it that the dancing on all of these videos looks more like sex than dancing?” Riley demanded after watching a few videos. Jessica shrugged, “It’s the style.” But her nonchalance vanished when both Riley and Angus glared at her
Intro Before continuing I should probably introduce myself, My names Jack, I’m a teenager, still at school and living with my parents. Looking forward to leaving it soon tbh. I’m pretty shredded but only got that way recently
“You double crossing bastards!” Riley yelled as he drew back his arm and landed blow upon blow on Scott’s face and head. “No!” Jessica yelled and tried to run to Riley and stop him but Josh had sensed she’d try to get involved and hung back, blocking her way
Taken: I hurried along to the tune of my ipod, my knee still hurting from volleyball practice, but I ignored it. I’d made a dive for the ball and landed too hard. The sun was out for the first day in 2 weeks. The warmth was a nice change
“Your new name is Daemon. Wake up!” Was all he could hear; having been taken from that abandoned site and taken elsewhere
Not surprisingly, Saturday was fraught. It was too wet for a walk, I couldn’t concentrate on reading or music, and I was all on my own, unsure what to wear, panicking about dinner
once again I would like to thank you all for taking the time to read my story. I'm trying my best to make it enjoyable for everyone so please take the time to rate it when you are done and of course comments and constructive criticism are both welcome and encouraged
Miranda sighed and shook her head, holding the days mail. The landlord had written her out an eviction notice and mailed it, instead of posting it on a freshly locked door, so she counted herself lucky
This is Ellie's second day A short introduction to it at least. I am looking for ways to develop it, so leave me ideas in the comments section and I will choose my favourite to finish the story
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